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For those who do not know what deus ex machina is, it’s like a magical wand that can solve all of the hero’s problems in unlikely ways. Deus ex machina is Latin for “god from a machine”, and ancient Greeks and Romans used it during plays to smooth out plots. Authors are not encouraged to use this plot device because most cannot use it properly, and the audience often ends up furious at the cop out.
Mary Shelley is one of the few authors who can pull of a deus ex machina without looking stupid. Why? She doesn’t slam it into the reader’s face. In Frankenstein, when the creature (for only the illiterate idiots call him Frankenstein) finds a giant coat in the middle of the forest that just happens to fit his massive stature, Shelley is using deus ex machina. While it’s really obvious, it doesn’t really affect the plot. Although she does use this plot device to move the plot along at times, she isn’t trying to shove the device down the reader’s throat, which makes it okay.
On the other hand, Christopher Paolini does not know how to pull off the deus ex machina. I don’t care whether you’ve built and alter in your closet and secretly worship the series. There is no denying that there are some serious cop outs in The Inheritance Cycle. Perhaps the most frustrating one is in Eldest. Some naken elf girl dances around Eragon and suddenly he’s cured of all his injuries, and it doesn’t end there. Instead of being a good little writer and planning things out so as not to pull a fast one on the reader, Paolini decides to use the naken-elf-ceremony to turn Eragon into a half-human/half-elf/dragon rider (coughMartyStucough). Instead of Eragon gradually receiving his powers, he gets everything in one night. Now Arya (Eragon’s love interest and oh-so perfect elf) wouldn’t have to angst about Eragon being of a different species. How convenient!
Plot devices are good and all, but they shouldn’t be used to cut corners. Nobody would enjoy reading a book that doesn’t make sense. An audience’s suspension of disbelief can only be willed so much. If you’re going to work so hard to develop a story, make sure that your characters can find reasonable ways out of a situation without using cheap tricks.